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Deferred Maintenance's avatar

I mean this in the most supportive and encouraging way possible, truly.

This was fucked up.

10/10. Would allow you to give me a nightmare about Shaq again.

Max Echard's avatar

“Truly” had me HOWLIN 😂

Thank you 🙏🏼

Yes, it is fucked up. Truly.

But the question I have for all of you is—did you laugh?

Even once?

Deferred Maintenance's avatar

Bro. Upwards of 5 or 6 hearty guffaws over here. The worst part?

My wife says, “what's so funny” and I literally couldn't. Nope. Staying married today, thanks. She don't need the stress of me explaining some Shaq themed horror story with an erotic undertone 🤣

Max Echard's avatar

Now THAT is the comment I write for.

And for the record, Shaq did nothing wrong.

Technically.

luca zani's avatar

really liked this!

Max Echard's avatar

Thanks!

If you like satire/comedy, check out the posts with sepia colored thumbnails.

The other stuff is heavier.

luca zani's avatar

I absolutely will! I'd love for you to check out my latest poem as well - always looking for feedback. Cheers!

Bryan Wiler's avatar

This is hilarious and brilliant. IDK how to pick my favorite line when there are dozens of them, but I’m a warrior, so damn it, I’ll power through. “That is not better” is the best line.

"What's a Bio Room?"

"It's where Mr. O'Neal gets to know people."

That is not better.

Max Echard's avatar

When I was growing up on the outskirts of Pittsburgh, I dreamed I'd one day write a sexual assault story about an NBA legend that involved nachos—and that people would call it funny. And brilliant.

Thank you, Bryan. Truly.

Bryan Wiler's avatar

🤣

James Mitchell's avatar

Perfection. The Shaq dialogue was on point. "See? We havin' fun."

Max Echard's avatar

Thanks, dude! Glad you enjoyed it.

Kazaam!

Dark Horse Insights by Adneen's avatar

I dreaded all the time while reading

Max Echard's avatar

Thank you for reading it. 🙏🏼

𝙻𝚎𝚜 𝙼𝚘𝚝𝚜 𝚂𝚊𝚞𝚟𝚊𝚐𝚎𝚜's avatar

Fucking unsettling in exactly the way it should be.

Max Echard's avatar

You’re tell me…

Thanks for the read 🙏🏼